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Dipti  Vyas's avatar

This took a minute for me to unpack. I found something quietly unsettling and honest in how this all sits together.

Your words speak of order, of laws, of time moving in a line as if it knows where it’s going. But the images refuse that obedience. They fracture it. They spill it sideways. Faces are cut, multiplied, stylized, performed. The eye in the center doesn’t just see, it consumes, rearranges, edits. Reality here isn’t given; it’s assembled, almost anxiously, from pieces that don’t fully agree with each other.

I keep returning to that tension:

the claim of structure

and the evidence of collage.

“Time passes, in its orderly fashion” but nothing here feels orderly. It feels lived. Interrupted. Rewritten. Like memory trying to behave but failing beautifully.

The technicolor to black and white shift isn’t just aesthetic it feels like consciousness moving between states. Between immersion and witnessing. Between being inside the image and suddenly seeing that it is an image.

And that last line”waiting for destruction, to take flight”

lands differently when held against all this visual layering.

It doesn’t feel apocalyptic.

It feels like release.

Like the destruction isn’t of the world, but of the illusion that it was ever singular, ever stable,

ever one thing.

What you’ve created here, poem and image together, feels like a meditation on the constructed self. Not as a problem, but as a process. A constant assembling. A constant dissolving.

Not chaos. Not order.

Something prior to both,

watching itself take shape.

Nick Hills's avatar

Your art gallery is always great! Thanks for sharing!

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