I loved how you use the glacier landscape and “erosion” as a metaphor for tension, vulnerability, and the strength that remains when two people go through separation without leaving each other.
Thank you Phoeby for reading so closely, it’s what came to mind when I was thinking about what has shaped me, mountains, which then unraveled into a dramatic metaphor about partnership, which has also transformed me.
I loved how you use the glacier landscape and “erosion” as a metaphor for tension, vulnerability, and the strength that remains when two people go through separation without leaving each other.
Thank you Phoeby for reading so closely, it’s what came to mind when I was thinking about what has shaped me, mountains, which then unraveled into a dramatic metaphor about partnership, which has also transformed me.
Amazing! I'm tired of winter, but the open, cold spaces and conflicting emotions always lure me to your poetry.
Thanks bro 😎
It’s true it’s often “conflicting emotion” I forget this is likely why I started writing poetry in the first place! lol
I tried to keep it together... but the car door clicks shut opening got me right in the ribs.
You felt it right like usual Asuka. Hope to ease your ribs though, maybe the next one